Voice vs. Tone – What’s the Difference and Why It Matters
“Voice” and “tone” are often used interchangeably—but in the publishing world they are not the same. And understanding the difference can elevate your manuscript from promising to polished.
Voice is the personality of the narrator or character. It’s how your story sounds—and the way your characters speak. It’s a blend of vocabulary, rhythm, point of view, and attitude.
Tone is the mood of the story—how the narrator feels about what’s happening. Is it playful? Somber? Sarcastic? Reverent?
Example:
In The Day the Crayons Quit by Drew Daywalt, each crayon has a distinct voice (e.g., whiny, dramatic, cheerful), while the overall tone is humorous and clever.
In The Undefeated by Kwame Alexander, the voice is poetic and powerful, while the tone is reverent and celebratory.
Ask Yourself:
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Does my manuscript have a consistent voice that suits my character?
- Do all my characters have distinct voices? (specific vocabulary, points of view, attitudes)
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Is the tone aligned with the story’s emotional arc and theme?
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Am I slipping out of voice when switching between dialogue and narration?
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